Pestilent

Wow, this blew me away. The words are so strong and dynamic. Really a great write.

I really can't express how this write made me feel. It could be one of the best you've written, in my opinion. I'm truly speechless, and I feel that nothing I would say could give justice to this poem.
I somehow missed to read this when you posted it.
It's flawless, it's breathtaking, and I don't feel like taking it apart and commenting every stanza separately, because, sincerely, it's perfect to me from the beginning to the end.

Definitely enjoyed reading this piece. I felt the structure was very befitting, I never got bored. It was almost as if I was reading a new poem with each break.

"You're a
silhouette
much like beauty,
unfaithful and yet
loved anyway.
A desired
alchemist
turning hearts
to stone
carefree monochrome
of darkened destiny."

---I love the word choice and description in this stanza. It paints an image into my mind, and I really appreciate that. It reads easily and with a great amount of depth.

I was drawn in by the title, but hooked by the detail and emotion. I rarely comment, but I just had to. I'm also adding this poem to my favorites. I'll be reading more. Great job...5/5, definitely!

-Rolo

Wonderful wording, this was another brilliant and mind-blowing poem. I really find no flaws in your pieces, and your writing is beyond great, so keep it up! A enjoyable read, straight from the heart. 5/5 from me :)

Absolutely amazing! I adore your poetry, you have such a charming way with words...

"You're a
silhouette
much like beauty,
unfaithful and yet
loved anyway."

^^^Love this part!

And the last stanza is by far my favorite, it really tied the whole piece up marvelously... A fantastic read, one I can relate with.