by Nandiix3 Jan 21, 2009
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
Your eyes look so trusting. |
by Ayumi
This poem really brings out what you feel, and I love it! It really relates to what I am feeling now.. :( Great! |
by Ayumi
A very well done. Though you confuse "your" with "you're", the message is clear and it shows very strong emotions. Nice! ^^ I have a similar poem about broken friendship; you might want to see it. :D |