I enjoyed it, I think its really good ^^
I always prefer poems that have a rhyme as I feel it helps the flow of the piece, Really great job =]

Nice poem. keep up the good work.

This was a rlly good poem i think u should keep it just the way it is it is sssooo good

I really liked this poem :)

This poem seems like a shakepearing kinda thing i love it can can so relate to it once again a good job that deserves a 5/5 =] <3

Keep up the good work! =]