Secret melody of my heart

by ECILA ice   Jan 22, 2009


Chimes ringing into the empty atmosphere
Harmonious sound fleeting from the crypt
Unlocking the esotorica of eros
Composing the best magical aria,
Killing abyss and solitude residing in my heart..

after a year of having mental block here i am, putting my heart into visible art..

This isn't my best poem yet my heart is with it. Hope you like it=)

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  • 13 years ago

    by mira

    I like it you knew how to pic words short but nice
    good work

  • 15 years ago

    by Annaam

    Hmm.... POrtrays a strOng imagery... M nOt used to this kinda pOetry, but I still like this what I read here. I'll say, I didn't get the end thOugh... hmm.

    5/5
    GoOd WOrk!

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Wow it is just brilliant how you portray this poem. The choice of words tt u used is juz amazing.All of those vocabs compact together forming a masterpiece.I certainly enjoy reading it...though i never read ur works b4 but i think this is ur best.

    Excellent Job
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    The words fit perfectly in this acrostic. though I feel it came from your heart it really made me think

    The line that truly grabed me was "Unlocking the esotorica of eros" as that would be my desire
    great poem 5>>>>>>>>>>>>

  • 15 years ago

    by ihrtschlepper

    I like the word choice. it has an elegant feeling about it, and i can almost hear the chimes. i like it. :)

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