"(and)Killing abyss and solitude residing in my heart.."

- NO WAY do you need 'and'. Personally I think the and in the beginning takes away from it. Not only does it defeat the whole acroustic thing, but it doesn't go with the poem.

You have a beautiful poem here. Definitely remove (and) from it and it'll be flawless.

Wow...
I fell in love with this poem.

Short, yet endlessly powerful write. I can't express how much I like every line. I wish it was longer.
Your choice of words is superb, and the atmosphere that you created took my breath away.
Flawless, so effective.

Keep writing.

I like the word choice. it has an elegant feeling about it, and i can almost hear the chimes. i like it. :)

The words fit perfectly in this acrostic. though I feel it came from your heart it really made me think

The line that truly grabed me was "Unlocking the esotorica of eros" as that would be my desire
great poem 5>>>>>>>>>>>>

Wow it is just brilliant how you portray this poem. The choice of words tt u used is juz amazing.All of those vocabs compact together forming a masterpiece.I certainly enjoy reading it...though i never read ur works b4 but i think this is ur best.

Excellent Job
5/5

Hmm.... POrtrays a strOng imagery... M nOt used to this kinda pOetry, but I still like this what I read here. I'll say, I didn't get the end thOugh... hmm.

5/5
GoOd WOrk!

I like it you knew how to pic words short but nice
good work