Comments : Life Gone Wrong

  • 15 years ago

    by xx

    The words all rhyme nicely together.
    "A person is there, and then she's gone.
    Lost forever, a life gone wrong."
    I like the last part(: The words fit together snugly.

  • 15 years ago

    by Evil One

    Nice poem it rhymed very nicely

  • 15 years ago

    by Marissa Anne

    I love the ryming of this poem it goes very well altogether

  • 15 years ago

    by RoseBlood

    Excellent rhyming.And the ending is great.
    5/5.