Wow girl I love this poem u did a great job of letting ur feling show and it touched my heart for it is just how I feel keep them coming

take care 5/5

Tammi

You showed your feelings really well in this!! I like that. This is definetly one I'm sure many people can relate to. Great Write!

Well written, the emotion you put into it was great!
well done
xo of course 5/5

Ok-first line i think the "so say" is supposed to be "to say"? don't know if that was just a typo or not :)

this was really sweet-very sad but also rally nice in the message. Is it based on a true story/experience? a death? a break-up? someone moving away? could work for either one.

I especially liked the 2nd stanza-another beautiful write.

5/5 again- and ur officially added to my favs

xx

Its really good..
i know exactaly how you feel.
i lost sumone close to me too..
:(

beautiful write.
keep it up!