Ok the flow was good and the idea is expressed very good , but you nedd to work more on the structure of your lines, and a bit on the rhyming , te subject is original and the but with good structure of the sylabls count and others you can make it wonderful adn mroe appealing to the reader ,.

5./5

Wow I really like how you portray the story in a poem format for this one. It is really captivating how you picture it.It's also sad that there is still racism going on in this world. They fail to see that what lies beneath is skin is the same bone structure of the same colour. The poem was nicely written.Keep it up

Excellent Job
5/5