Oh my gosh!!!!!!! Nice!! I knew you could do one well ^_^
I like the repition of the lights being burnt out--it was tastefully, and not over, done.
You've managed to still have a good flow and a solid form without rhyming, and the directness of 'I am dead' is pretty intense.
"but no blood falls
my skin is dry'

love those lines! great job!

This poem was extremely intense. You used no rhyming and that was a good decision. this poem did not need any rhymes in it. Somehow you have managed to have a good flow of words, nice word choices.

You also described a scene very well without actually having to say what it was. [If that makes sense]

I dont suggest you change anything in this poem, it's perfectly well written just the way it is.

5/5