Deaths Anomaly

Cries will produce the song,
A melody formed by hatred.

Morbid , yet beautiful.

This is amazing, ive tried and failed to write a poem just like this, very nice, good word good flow very ggoo! im speachless

This is a perfectly well written poem, From what i read it seemed like you held nothing back. my favorite stanza was...

"Pain provides this harmony
Cries will produce the song,
A melody formed by hatred
A tune for life now gone"

its so dark and deep and totally going on my fav authors. Great job and i wana read more. No wonder why its a winner, you totally deserved it times a million.

You have a very indigenous vocabulary. you use it so well. almost seemed like a magicians chant a bit. lol.

but anyway, it was very creepy, dark. made me think of a graveyard and rotting flesh. i'm not sure why. oh and thx for your comment

~Ben

I can see why this was a winner. You are so talented the way you weave words into your poem and make them dazzle the reader