"It's not like a planned it"
- I think a should be I. But, at the same time you can use a while singing or even speaking to give it oomph. Like kinda, I'ma, stuff like that. So, I may be wrong. But, I've pointed it out just in case

The poem/song itself is really nice. I liked the emotions through-out it. It wasn't too much, even with the cursing. Everything seemed to flow well and go well together