by Nobodys Hero
I beg to differ really, I thought your flow worked quite well ^^ |
by aDORKable x3
I'll agree with the flow being a bit off, but other than that, it was deep. I felt the emotions in every word, every line. I bet it feels great to get that off your chest. |
I was so stupid and foolish |
by Faithless
Well i like that the poem was straight forward. It just shows the innocence of the protagonist.But is certainly tragic how it ends. |
by Annaam
It's well-written.. :) |
by Not Enough
WOW,,, this one is my favorite! |
This was jus how i feel to it i was the same way and now i havnt anymore. What i really like in this is that its showing that cutting is a mistake annd that it is like a drug. Im so happy u recognize that..........hang in there if u need to talk im here 5 out of 5 |