Razor

by katelyn   Jan 23, 2009


Tightens her fist
pulls down the razor
everyone says this lets go of the anger
puts it to her arm takes it all in
takes a deep breath
here she goes again
she doesnt want to be here
she dreams of being dead
she just wonders what they'll think of her than
closes her eyes
screams in pain
as the blood rushes out
as the razor splits her veins
tightens her fist
pulls down the razor
everyone says this lets go of the anger...

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  • 15 years ago

    by ToRn iiN2 PeIcEs

    Wow.this poem is reallll deep
    and sad,
    sounds painful but 5/5 for discribing everything so well.

  • 15 years ago

    by lonelydreamer

    This poem is really good, there is just something about that draws me in. its sad and its good

  • 15 years ago

    by Not Enough

    I really love this it's excellent.
    It's really sad though, is it about you?
    Hope not
    but I love the way you repeated

    Tightens her fist
    pulls down the razor
    everyone says this lets go of the anger

    It's my favorite part.