Comments : Razor

  • 15 years ago

    by Not Enough

    I really love this it's excellent.
    It's really sad though, is it about you?
    Hope not
    but I love the way you repeated

    Tightens her fist
    pulls down the razor
    everyone says this lets go of the anger

    It's my favorite part.

  • 15 years ago

    by lonelydreamer

    This poem is really good, there is just something about that draws me in. its sad and its good

  • 15 years ago

    by ToRn iiN2 PeIcEs

    Wow.this poem is reallll deep
    and sad,
    sounds painful but 5/5 for discribing everything so well.