Wow!
that was amazing
the flow and rhyming was so fantastic.
that was an amazing poem.
if you did have to go through this than im sorry that yu had to =(

fantastic
5/5
kep writing

Speechless yet again. YOu've dOne a great jOb with this One toO! :)

It's a very sad One but very relateable in ways toO. StrOng expressiOns, great descriptiOns and goOd use of vOcab!

Just One thing, in the line 'Two weeks has passed and I remember everything I won't miss,...', it shOuld be 'Two weeks HAVE...'

5/5.
Keep It Up! :)

I loved this it was good i konw how it is to run form things

Tnx<3

Your such a great writer!

This poem is so powerful, especially to me. I ran away 6 times. And the last time i spent 6 months on the streets. I know the fears of being homeless. To not know when ur going to eat; if ur gonna be warm enough to sleep; if the cops are gonna find you and take you home to another fight. Luckily i finally found a place to call home. But this poem reminds me of everything i went through to get her. 5/5 for me. And thanks 4 the comment