Heart So Broken

by Fire Catches   Jan 23, 2009


I should've seen it
Why were my eye's closed
I didn't wanna see it
Your fatal blows

You promised
But I knew you lie
All this time you were pretending
Leaving me to die

Inside twisting
Crying on out
Wrist begin to bleed
Heart needing to shout

Hazel eyes hurt
Tears begin to burn
About to collide
From this wide turn

Shouting disgrace
Leaving me in pain
Heart so torn
Making me insane

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  • 15 years ago

    by Cate Rock

    This was... origional and deep. 5/5 good job ^_^

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Hazel eyes hurt
    Tears begin to burn
    About to collide
    From this wide turn

    *This was my favorite stanza. Your sad poems remind me of some of mine :) You always write with such emotion. I love that. Keep it up hun. Nik*

  • 15 years ago

    by Hologram

    "Shouting disgrace
    Leaving me in pain
    Heart so torn
    Making me insane."

    -God, I hate this being able to relate thing,
    it's what makes me realize I have a problem.

    5/5 anyway, great stuff dude.

  • 15 years ago

    by eR

    First verse is my fav.
    well writ, it flows nicely :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Crystal

    WOWAH!! i loved this, it was so heart felt..
    i could almost feel the pain you describe.

    Inside twisting
    Crying on out
    Wrist begin to bleed
    Heart needing to shout

    my favourite verse.. it sticks out from the rest..
    its really sad when ones heart gets broken

    10/5 <3 (: xx

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