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by Teria Jan 23, 2009 category : Love, romance / lost love
Forget those alligator heads, that crayon box filled with broken ones. Don't you recall the empty cartoon, with scattered pictures everywhere? Falling awake I stop to think, in the dreaming mindset I'm in as figurines have left me haunted, while seeing your smiling face. That ring tone I made just for you, now it never chimes a melody barren cold, desperately alone awaiting what a heart forgot. Those words, they're simple yet so cliche - but I guess that fits with your classic heartbeat and holding my hand.I'm returning home, I thought you should know - ex marks the spot, only when it shows. And, I've hidden emotions blocked out the memories. Burned up all the remains and forgotten the ashes - to blow away in a peaceful hell.
by Beautiful Chaos
That ring tone I made just for you, now it never chimes a melody barren cold, desperately alone awaiting what a heart forgot. ^This was my favorite stanza, i thought you made it modern, using "ringtone" and I like the way you tied it in with the emotion. I also enjoyed the ending Burned up all the remains and forgotten the ashes - to blow away in a peaceful hell. ^The last line especially. All in all it was a nice read. Good work.