It's out of the question for some
Some accept the challenge

To rid the repetition , maybe change the second some to others .

The other has varies definitions

Since this doesn't really make sense .. Maybe change it to The other varies in definition

Discrimination there is plenty

Add a ; to seperate these two ideas , so in between Discrimination and there .

Otherwise , I think this poem is fantastic . It's got an amazing message . I'm going

Never accept the abandonment in a relationship
For with the personal experience
You will come to find a great disappointment with who you were alluded
Refuse if you have a choice
For the one that will be most hurt
Is you

^^^^Really wise words, Katie.
Indeed to accept being ingnored most of the times is killing for your self esteem. You are so right.

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid