I can relate to this piece in so many ways. You conveyed the message here greatly.
I like your descriptions. Vividness of this piece's superb.
Whole poem holds captivating atmosphere, and it's truly effective from the beginning to the end.
The second stanza is my favorite one, it's flawless and utterly powerful.
The ending seems simple, yet it holds whole spectrum of emotions, deeply heartfelt.

Great piece.

The second stanza speaks volumes, in my opinion, a great piece as usual from you.
I keep waiting
to be astounded
by love,
Don`t wait too long my dear, for lov can surely pass you by. Timothy