Don't think of me as gone

Very lovely heartfelt write...

"Stop sorrows lonely tears
Its not yet my setting sun"
^^ loved how these words are consoling the one who is left back ...

and the jouney to the heavenly abode is beautifully described...

"Lovingly I stare back down
gazing at earth from on high"
^^ loved it...looking back for someone left...

"See you again soon my love
Renewing our love in the sky "
^^ beautiful lines... very touching ...

Your poem is beautiful and full of hope and love. Your rhymes are perfect and the flow is great but the message is the beauty of this write. I hope that all your hopes and dreams are realized!

Welcome back :) What a beauty you have come back with.

Don't think of me as gone
My life has just begun
Stop sorrows lonely tears
Its not yet my setting sun

I love the hope in this stanza. That there is something there to still live for.

Rather I soar up swiftly
Gliding majestic bird of flight
smiling on my lunar passage
Draped in canvas of velvet night

What a picture your words have painted for the minds eye.

Dashing through open meadows
Amber waves dance in the breeze
Lords merciful radiance and glory
Brightly shines down upon me

Love the word choices and imagery portrayed through the entire poem.

Lifted by lights eternal peace
Heaven's pearly gates open slow
Once again finding my feet
Familiar faces greet me as I go

What a wonderous feeling I got when reading this stanza.

Lovingly I stare back down
gazing at earth from on high
See you again soon my love
Renewing our love in the sky

What a great ending.
Excellent job son!
Love you
Mom

Even though this poem is sad it has a powerful message. What I take away from the write is that someone has died and gone to heaven and is telling their loved one, not to be sad or cry. That you will meet them again in heaven and your love will be renewed. Excellent write, the flow is good, simple but powerful words used to convey your message. Good job. 5/5

This is an awesome poem indeed. Anything is possible when there is hope.

all the best and take care