by Bill Turner Jan 23, 2009
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
Some say God does not hate |
I agree! With you a 100% |
Nice. Short. Powerful. I liked that you had an ABAB rhyme scheme, which I rarely see anymore. One thing, though, in my opinion, I think the last line should read 'I embrace this death' as I just think it would flow just a little nicer, but even though, the piece does fine as it is. A good piece, in my opinion. |