Oh wow teddy bear this is amazing
I love you so much my sister my frined

Wow... Tara. This. Is. Amazing!

I'm quite speechless by it actually, there is so much emotion in this poem, yet it never gets repetitive or veers off track, which many people do nowadays.

This is my favourite part:

"From the dark caress of twilight
To the kiss of awakening dawn"

To me, this is the most descriptive part, as it is one of the parts with the most adjectives, and it encases feelings perfectly. For example, this is the time where people get lonely, drifting into or arising from dreams that belong to thier loved ones. You may not have realised it, but this is an amazing write.

This definately gets a 5 from me, and my weekly vote!

Well done, and keep writing Tara,

Emily :)