I loved the use of colors; creative and sensitive. Giving the reader such an image. The whole poem just makes you want to smile.

"But the pencil shatters against her will,
the tears in her eyes just don't seem to spill."
this part was my favourite.

loved the poem

This is so sweet. I loved how you incorperated colored pencils and love. Great combination by the way. Really smart I wouyld have never thought of it.