Amazing blessings [haiku]

by Boy   Jan 25, 2009


Air, sun, rain, clouds,earth and sky
inspire me to write
thank you lord, to make them all.

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Haiku is a Chinese style poetry having syllabus 5 7 5 with 3 lines usually.

but it happened by chance... i wrote 7 5 7 syllabuss maybe a new style of haiku i just invent..

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  • 13 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is a super poem taking nature to its highest level in my book very original

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/haiku/haiku.html

    This is not a Haiku, but still that does not mean it is a bad poem.
    A Haiku should have 5/7/5 or less, a lot of poets on here do not know that.

    This short verse was really nice as well!

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    The original Haiku is supposed to be 5,7,5 like you stated.. Ive done a 7,5,7 as well.. and its not a Haiku I guess, but still you got the idea of nature which is good.

    Short but definatly a wonderful piece. Its interesting to see what inspires other poets to write.. and youve clearly said your inspirations in such few words.

    Well done.
    :]

    5/5.

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