The original Haiku is supposed to be 5,7,5 like you stated.. Ive done a 7,5,7 as well.. and its not a Haiku I guess, but still you got the idea of nature which is good.

Short but definatly a wonderful piece. Its interesting to see what inspires other poets to write.. and youve clearly said your inspirations in such few words.

Well done.
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5/5.

Http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/haiku/haiku.html

This is not a Haiku, but still that does not mean it is a bad poem.
A Haiku should have 5/7/5 or less, a lot of poets on here do not know that.

This short verse was really nice as well!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

This is a super poem taking nature to its highest level in my book very original