by crystaljean88 Jan 25, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Taking care of a little girl, |
This was a truly sad and beautiful poem. Nice work. |
by Love Fallacy
I liked the story through this poem, but would work a little on the flow. It seemed a bit choppy in some areas. |
by JAY Poet
I loved it!!! |
by M I L L Y
Wow this poem is great 5/5 |
by Faithless
Well i can feel the emotions running thru the poem from the start to the finish...It is a sad write indeed. But im sure tt ure a good mom...and im sure tt she would understand when she get older...But it's good that she is with you then her junkie father...coz she would be saying "Mommy, call mommy" instead.It was certainly a pleasure to read this poem |