Your killing me.

by BrokenVodkaBottle   Jan 26, 2009


Im lost inbetween.
who i was and who i want to be
the drugs the achahole the sex
is this really me?
i used to be inlove
used to have dreams.
but everything seemed to fall
apart at the seams.
im crushed and betrayed
hurt beyond repair.
how can i save myself again?
this pain, it isnt fair.
you let me go.
then you pull me back
you broke me dissed me.
how could you do me like that?
i loved you.
with as much as i could with this broken heart
you said you loved me,
then you sat there and tore me apart
tell me what do i do.
when the person i love is the person i hate
tell me, how do i walk away,
but how do i stay when pain you create.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Love is a foe with many weapons that it can use on us. The pain of the wounds can be deep. I can see that pain here and the emotions you protrayed have been felt by many, especially poets or those with tender hearts. You did well here in letting that pain out and I think your write was a good one. Keep up the good work.

  • 15 years ago

    by Hologram

    I really like it.

    I feel what yur sayin'.

    Great work
    :)

  • 15 years ago

    by TeenXLoveXTragedy

    I really like this..it has so much emotion and i can really relate. Everyone has that point in life where they just stop and realize they dont know what they're doing anymore. Great job. 5/5

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