I really like this..it has so much emotion and i can really relate. Everyone has that point in life where they just stop and realize they dont know what they're doing anymore. Great job. 5/5

I really like it.

I feel what yur sayin'.

Great work
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Love is a foe with many weapons that it can use on us. The pain of the wounds can be deep. I can see that pain here and the emotions you protrayed have been felt by many, especially poets or those with tender hearts. You did well here in letting that pain out and I think your write was a good one. Keep up the good work.