And the fake m? Pardon?

Anyway. Despite that, I liked this. You get a good feel for the loss. It reads fairly well, though could do with a little more... I don't know, fiddling, to get the flow better, you do what you feel's right though, that's the important thing.
Particularly liking the caesura and the stop! line, both effective and eye catching.

Good work - Schem.