Hey Cayce

For me it's quite odd, because I am into dark poems and so. Though I love the way you associate colors with a person. It makes the feelings more intimit. The colors are always powerful in a poem, and makes it very interesting. The thing about colors is, they are a symbol of everything in the world. Blue = water and cold, red = warmth, fire and love and so on. There should be more poems with colours.
Good job

Ooh. Cayce. lol
i like this poem.
i like how you describe the different color crayons.
i love the way you use your words to draw pictures in peoples minds. so yeah, good.
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