Awwww! This waas really really cuye and sweet. Loved the flow and rhyming scheme. It was wonderfully written. Loves it great job 5/5

Wow ! I loved this one !

I like the idea that you have penned this down in a straight forward manner. You have painted beautifully of how a 1st love should be...Through out the poem I can feel how you felt abt this 1st love of yours. It's very sweet how you portray this. Well certainly it was a delightful to read. Keep it up

Excellent Job
5/5

Really nice poem. Written in short but powerful sentences. Some sentences seem repeated and almost mean the same. The title is really nice and i think you stuck to it. Nice write.