I think we've all felt that way, before we find the right person to love, we always fall in love with a lie, and in that moment, when we think that we are being hurt the most, we think of dying, and stuff like that, but, believe me it's worthless to feel that way. Even though we think we will never be able to love and be happy again, the right person will find us, and will help us to get out of the "pain zone".
Anyway, great poem, excellent rhyming.
5/5 Carla