Firstly, if this is true, oh my... I would be able to say a very simmular thing happened to me though. Well simmular in my opinion.

Anyway, this piece is amazing. The story and the emotion are both so enticing in this piece. Even though it is long, it is interesting. Your choice of words was wonderful, and it helped create a magnificent flow; in most places. There are wonderful examples of many things though every poetry aspect is dead on perfection.

I love this piece so much. Excellent job.