by Jenni Marie Jan 27, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
They say you have to kiss a few frogs before you find your prince |
I loved every bit of this poem, it was very well written and a very enjoyable read :) nice job, I look forward to reading more 5/5 |
Damn this was sorta long but it trulie was worth reading it. like ppl say n i have been told what doesnt kill us can only makes us stronger. many heartbreaks each ones is different. but i love it that true love can be. amazing job. |
by Hollymariee
.. I've never seen a poem with long verses so flawless . Your flow is absolutely perfect .. And the idea is so amazing I really have nothing to say . I love it . I also love the repetition at the end .. It makes it even more beautiful . Seriously well done , 5/5 |
by Hollymariee
.. I've never seen a poem with long verses so flawless . Your flow is absolutely perfect .. And the idea is so amazing I really have nothing to say . I love it . I also love the repetition at the end .. It makes it even more beautiful . Seriously well done , 5/5 |
by Krista
I loved your word usage in this poem! I liked the flow. Im kinda a punctuation nerd so not having commas or periods kinda bothered me. Other than that small detail...I liked the rhyming and how you repeated the first verse as the last. Keep it up!! |