A heart that can't love

by Obscura   Jan 27, 2009


I would love if i could but I'm too bitter and cold inside its something Ive lived with and cannot hide i look at lovers everyday in my life and i die more and more inside knowing that will never be me as my heart lies in a pile of debris the pain of being lonely grows if only i knew how to cry but i forgot to so the sadness remains forever inside

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  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    Sad yet beautiful poem, 5/5. Em

  • 15 years ago

    by BrokenHeartStillBeat

    I loved it. Depressing and deep.

  • 15 years ago

    by Grace

    The title was greeat!
    truly sad and i could imagine the coldness.
    the situation is fairly similar to the one i am in..
    but ive learned things will always get better eventually =]

  • 15 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    This is so deep. Very powerful write. Its really sad, but like above ^^ oneday you'll find love and you can be happy. I will say, it would be easier if you wrote in paragraph formation kinda thing. But apart from that the write was excellent. Keep it up. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Hollywood

    I really liked this but you put lyes and I think its supposed to be lies.
    But over all it was honest and sincere!
    5/5

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