I really liked this but you put lyes and I think its supposed to be lies.
But over all it was honest and sincere!
5/5

This is so deep. Very powerful write. Its really sad, but like above ^^ oneday you'll find love and you can be happy. I will say, it would be easier if you wrote in paragraph formation kinda thing. But apart from that the write was excellent. Keep it up. 5/5

The title was greeat!
truly sad and i could imagine the coldness.
the situation is fairly similar to the one i am in..
but ive learned things will always get better eventually =]

I loved it. Depressing and deep.

Sad yet beautiful poem, 5/5. Em