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by jasmine cherry Jan 28, 2009 category : Sadness, depression / lost relationships
The love that i held so deep in my heart Is gone The hope that i felt about you Has now faded You the on i thought i loved You the on i trusted Has disappeared I have the burning desire to sneak behind you And take what rightfully mine That thumping little ticker in your chest The heart that stutters when you think of me That's mine,MINE You stole it from me when i wasn't looking You cut it out of my chest and ran off with it You don't deserve itSo I'll take while you sleep While you dream sweet dreams about no being with me I will sneak into the room with the pink and white walls Onto the bed where you told me you loved me Put one hand over your sweet little mouth And cut out my heart that thumps in your chestAnd while you lie there kicking and screaming tears of joy will fill my eyes You the one i thought i loved You the only one i trusted is dying And I'm happyNow i can take back the love you stole from me The love that you never deserved The love that i should have never let you see The love that is now back in my heart
by Cate Rock
This it really good! it tells a story and keeps with the main idea. it paints a picture and its a topic most ppl can relate to! i give it a 5/5 ^_^
by Diana
Very good poem..full of emotions....5/5