Snowman

by BitterXSweetness   Jan 28, 2009


From the chilly sky to Earth

From freezing flakes to ball

Formless and frozen

Until you heard my call!

Button eyes, carrot nose, white flakes

Formed into a magnificent piece of art

Wonderfully made,

Right from the start!

(C)Scarlet Razor
Written: Jan. 27, 2009

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I wrote this in the perspective of a snowman. And I wrote it all in like 10 minutes. lol Yup I was bored. This is my 1st ever nature poem so please tell me what u think. ^.^

But PLEASE comment AND vote!!! If your going 2 take time out 2 read it, just please click a button. I really do appreciate it. Thank u ^.^

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  • 15 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    This is a BRILIANT poem .. I loved it so much! LOL. Very well done :]
    Keep up the good work!

  • 15 years ago

    by Steady Stereotype

    I found this to be cute. A short adorable poem that everyone can relate to. It seems to be told as if to be read for a young child and I really liked it.

    "From the chilly sky to Earth

    From freezing flakes to ball"

    ^These first two lines were absolutely adorable. A wonderfully written poem. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by xxxStarSxxx

    Aww I thought this was really cute. Imediately from the start I understood what you were talking about!!

    5/5

    ~Stefanie

  • 15 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    I think it is short but it is good. lol. 5/5 in my book.

  • 15 years ago

    by coverd in darkness

    Described wonderfully.... describes a place i'd rather be as i write this it's 43degrees and its 8:15pm. I love the line From freezing flakes to ball. Great work for your first nature poem 5/5

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