*hugs* didnt realise it was quite so bad...anything u need let me know

Thanks for sharing it with us... i guess many would learn ...

wonderfully written...the pain you left and the discomfort you are suffering is captured well ...

"Stuck in bed not aloud outside,
You can prevent all this in so little time."

^^ thanks for the warning ;)

but a some places I think the flow was off

"It'll turn into the demon in time just wait you shall see,"

^^ may be you could trim this line a little ... it didnt match the overall structure... or try keping the syllable count same...

a good read...