Inner strength ( Senryu)

by Ingrid   Jan 28, 2009


Inner strength ( Senryu)

Strong and free is he
guided by his inner voice
and lead by our Lord

A club contest poem, using the word "Power"

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  • 15 years ago

    by The Prince

    You're so good at these, I really enjoy reading them, I think it's like a speciality of yours or something ;]
    I can't leave massive comments on short poems usually because it's hard to intertwine lots of imagery into 10-15 words, but this was great use of the word 'power', and I'd love to see you write more. Excellent.

  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    What a beautiful piece you have written, your words are so touching and true. Very in-deepth and powerful for such a small amount of words. 5/5 from me, take care and keep writing always and forever!

  • 15 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Aw, I liked this one. It was a powerful little bugger. I feel it really captures inner strength. Many of us rely on religion to give us inner strength and I like how you underlined that.

    5

  • 15 years ago

    by SADADDY

    WOW....What can I say but "Powerful".

    Scott aka sadaddy

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    Awww Ingrid, such an inspirational poem. The one who looks inside themselves for the answers to life and the ones that seek help from God, always come out on top :]
    A fabulous poem, you always manage to say so much, with so little wording. Awesome :]
    5/5