I dont really knwo how to coment on this one , love note that are not real , but yet so close to reality , soo dificult to not beleve , and yet , my mind wnat to read that note

^_^

great one

This is absolutely wonderful.. so talented.. great idea.. keep the good work..

This peom is realllllly goooood i like it alot. it has alot of emotions in it

Jen this is absolutely beautiful...I don't how to tell you tt i really love it ... the way you penned it down has this smooth flow and everything makes sense.I like the idea of your u infusing the usage of note pen etc...

Excellent Job

"Draw me a heart on paper; lined."
`I loved how you switched this up.. because normally it's really "lined-paper", but I'm glad that you didnt do it that way, instead made it sound different yet hold the same meaning obviously. :]

"Don't keep feelings so confined.
Spill me words upon a page.
Unleash your heart from the cage."
`Your word choice is simple, yet flawless. Loved the "unleash your heart"part.. very very well said.

"Letter by letter, not so neat,
to exchange when we meet.
From love to love, note to note.
To you this paper I devote."
`Cuuute! This is such an adorable piece. I love the rhyme too.. it makes every word just flow so smoothly.

"Pencil, pen, no matter to me
as long as words I can see.
I love you's throughout the lines
and worded emotions of all kinds."
`I suppose you could say that your last line was kind of said earlier on in the poem, but it wasnt bad that you repeated it.. it was just noticable to me. Beautiful wording.

"A heart in pen, jagged and black.
All I want is a scribble heart back.
Take this note in your hand,
read it and you'll understand."
`A heart in pen? I didnt necessairly understand that..?

"I love you and always will
and in here my feelings spill.
We'll look back on these one day
and know our love won't go away."
`Haha, cute. So true. Once love is built, it basically remains, it doesnt fade nor die.

Cute write my dear.
5/5 :]

LOve it. It's very sweet! The rhyming and flOw are perfect.

A definite 5/5 deserved! :)
Keep It Up!

I love this poem! its so amazing. I know a lot of girls can relate to this poem. The cool thing is I find most poems that are very relateable, aren't very original, and this is. I've never seen anything like it. I love the whole idea and setting of the poem :)

I love how the first stanza really sets up the whole poem, its beautiful :)

Amazing, keep it up :)

5/5 +

Wow! You really described the great feeling of getting a love note and how your heart just races as you read what it contains. This was very unique and I am glad I came across it! 5/5