My World Stopped

by Rachel   Jan 28, 2009


Your silence is bitter.
nothing feels right
I don't have the soul,
won't stand for the fight.

He tries to calm my tears
but he's not my love.
he's a complication
I push and I shove

I don't mean to hurt
but I'm hurting so much.
I can't just forget
what we had, every touch.

I just want to go back,
I don't want someone new.
Cause I'll always know
it'll never be you.

But he keeps holding tighter.
I pretend that it's you.
It's wrong and I know it,
but my thoughts still sink through

I'll never stop comparing,
and I'll never forget
the memories we shared
and the moment we met.

I loved you with my being
I gave you all I had.
You'll never care you broke me,
it seems to make you glad.

How can you be so heartless?
Why don't you feel this pain?
It surges through my body.
Attacking again and again.

And you stayed happy,
your life moved on.
My world stopped
when you were gone.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This was very well done. It has a constant flow and it's easy to read. The diction fits the simple style of the poem wheich is good. I like how each stanza leads into the next, it's flawless. Very good job, I enjoyed it. Nik

  • 15 years ago

    by Clown

    I know this feeling way to well. My sistuations a little diferent, but some wut the same. I lost someone dear to me, and feel shes irreplacable, and that no one can compare to her, but she died, and i still hold her in my heart so dear to me. I have moved on, im 21 yrs old and married with a kid and another on the way, but i do infact love my wife, and i would do anything for her. Yet there are times i wonder,"What if?" how would my life be different, how would it be simalar, would i still be the man i am today? the answear is, i truly dont know, but at then i look at my wife, and figure, despite everything, I am truly happy with the life i do have.
    I guess what im saying is, dont look to the past for the answears to your questions, look to the future, look to wut is and wut is to be. if the guy your with is a good guy and he loves you, dont push him away, embrace him, but at the same time make sure he knows that you still have troubles letting go of the past. Im not telling you to forget, im not telling you not to want it back, but i am saying is, its gone, and there is only so much you can do about it, for me, there is nothing, i cant go back in time and stop her death, i cant bring her back. dont let yourself live in the pain, for that is pointless, the past is the past for a reason.
    My personal mantra is this,
    Remember the past and learn,
    Live in the present and know,
    Look to the future and hope,
    We has humans are only worth the wieght of our chooses,
    this is only advice, you can hate me for it, or you could respectfully ignore it, or you can thank me for it. it is the way i live, i dont try to push my way of life on others, but i will offer my way of life to those who i need something new to go off of. everyone deserves to be happy, everyone deserves to for tommaro

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