Comments : Because Of You.

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Lovely write ... this one left me with a smile ... loved the happy ending part...

    how love can change a person ... how hard it is to let someone into our life after a heartbreak... everything is beautifully narrated ...

    and the descriptions of how love can give warmth to our heart... is wonderful .. couldnt pint out one specific stanza because all the verses helped to bring out the feeling ...

    loved the emotions behind each word...
    wonderful write...

  • 15 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Look what only one person with efert n strength can do to you. patients n strength in mind this person gave you true smiles in time. it made me smile cuz in parts of this it reminded me of someone n that again one person in our lives can do for us. i love it. amzing flow from beginning n end. great job!!! each word had a meaning to me.
    5/5

    TaKe CaRe,
    frenchy