Wow Kel

I love how you portray this. You have chosen an excellent choice of words to make the poem dance and made it colourful

Feeling the sensation of his arm encircled my waist
The heat getting high, seductive energy flies

^^ I love your description of this your imaginery is excellent too;)

Overall i truly enjoyed the poem...it was a delightful to read.This poem just proves once again tt you're a brilliant poet;)

Excellent Job
5/5

A really warm and tender write, Kel..but also very passionate..I don't know how you manage to mould it all into one poem every time!
A really beautiful poem:)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

"Like the start of a love affair,
Feeling such closeness, having you near
The only thing that comes between us is the music
Which enters our hearts, while our bodies master its art"
^^ theres so much compassion in these lines ...loved how you have mingled the passion shown in dancing with passion of love..

"The fire of desire shines in his eyes as I gaze in his face
Feeling the sensation of his arm encircled my waist
The heat getting high, seductive energy flies"
^^ again beautiful lines... full with passion and emotion... two dancers in love .. how with each step the love grows ... well described...

"Looking in your eyes with love that puts the fun together,
The sadness apart and the joy overflow our heart"

^^ I love see little hearts all over the verse ...

"Confidently letting you led the way that brings back memories everytime I think of this day. "

^^ lovely ending ... saving this lovely day in the memory to be recalled again n again...ending with a smile ... beautifully penned...

Whoa... this was whoa.. lol i loved it from beginning to end. the flow was right there. n i love the words u choice in this wonderful piece . truly another amazing job. keep it girl!
5/5

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy

Woahh. What a fantastic write. The imagery had me attached to the poem until the very end. What a stunningly flawless piece of amazing poetry. I am blown away! I dont know what to say.
The wording was immaculate. The flow was perfect, a really nicely written piece.
wonderful!
5/5

Sweetly Written and Wonderfully Penned, Superbly Done!!!

Very sensual imagery enhanced by a great free flow

5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>