To Ares (well, inspired anyway :P)

by Gabba Gabba Hey   Jan 29, 2009


Your gaze fell on me like a cold cascade of effervescent raindrops, falling into my eyes with a cool splash. I wasn't sure how to read the emotions on your face, they were melded and weaved so perfectly into one facade, I would've been surprised if you could recognize them yourself.

The marble quality of your eyes degenerates into a liquid fire that assaults mine, and conjures up hidden emotions from years before. Once, this was how I felt all the time. Once, before I had you.

I suppose it would be appropriate for me to smile, but when you turn your back, I see no reason to embarass myself with meaningless gesture. Kindess is a poor mans' virtue. You taught me that.

I'm sitting on a bed of needles, but the pain doesn't seem to faze me. I merely feel a vaguely unpleasant, surreal tingling sensation, not at all unlike how it felt last time I was with you. I wonder absentmindedly if that's why I don't bother standing up. But this is a fleeting thought, and I am soon consumed by the sensation of a panging blankness in the pit of my stomach.

I'm not going to say it's like you took a piece of me with you when you left, because it wouldn't be true. I no longer exist. I feel as if I'm stuck on some random plain of existence with no chance for requite, no paroll for an offense I didn't commit. Sometimes, I remember the fire in your gaze, and think that this isn't so bad.

The only thing that makes this worse is the memories of happiness. I smile into this seeming darkness that surrounds me (I've lost the ability to tell if it's real or not) with a sort of half malice that frightens me. I wish I couldn't picture you as well as I can. It doesn't hurt, it just makes it harder for me to forget.

All at once I slip into the solitude and isolation that's surrounded me for the past month or so, or perhaps a year. I don't remember any more. I fancied I heard your voice, your footsteps following me. But I couldn't distinguish it from the pounding of my own heart.

The illusion shatters into a million peices, like a glass thrown in the heat of an arguement, and leaves me with splinters covering my body.

(sorry, bell ^_^)

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  • 15 years ago

    by Ares

    ...

    this is me, desperatly trying to come up with a better word to describe my love and admiration for this poem. All I've managed to cough up is:

    WOW!

    I've got bruises on my jaw from when it dropped to the floor with a loud, hard BANG!

    I'm seriously struggling to even produce some form of objective and constructive set of words to do justice to how I felt reading this poem. I believe I am quite the normal man, capable of hiding my emotions except for when I sit down at my desk with a hot cup of tea, but this really made me fight back the anxious tear of happiness, eager to take flight across my cheek and escpe in to my mouth.

    This is without a doubt in my strange little mind, the coolest, the sweetest and the most amazing thing I've ever read and to have it dedicated to me...I'm in awe of you, miss!

    Thank you...it's really all I can say now without sound like a complete fool.

    (given that I understood the poem correctly. If not, then I bet this comment will endeed provoke laughter...)

    Cheers!