by Cindy
This piece is really beautiful yet heart breaking. Great imagery and word choices. |
by Sylvia
Perfect ponds tranquility now ripples on a breeze. |
I really havent met any poet on this site who could write a sad poem with such imagination. Great write my friend and i am glad that you are able to release by writing now. |
When heartbreak is present it is so hard to see the beauty in anything. You can rid yourself of everything that has to do with a broken heart except the memories and those will haunt us for life. Wonderful job on the poem. Take Care, Kay |
Recollection of our laughter I recall and fondly smile. |
by Dreamofolwin
A very intense and tearjerking write. So beautifully written and expressed, and yet, so sad. LOL . The imagery used, and how the opening lines tell how everything around has changed that "even natures splendour cant quell this broken heart" was very touching. I look forward to reading more of yours. |