Come back and give me life

by kevin Boundy AKA the ghost   Jan 30, 2009


Remembering a wonderful sight
Wishing it to still be true
It's been 10 days since
I said my goodbyes to you

Since you left me on my own
This tear stained note is all I have left
You took everything including my heart
I'm a victim of emotional theft

I wish I was tripping
Over that empty suitcase by our door
I wish I would just accept your love
Instead of wishing I had more

So just sit back and watch me go insane
As I scream to the skies above
She said she wished she knew the man
In which she fell in love

She said I wasn't the same person
To whom she gave her heart
One more day and i know
That I will surely fall apart

Since you left
The only thing I have left is this knife
Baby please unpack your suitcase
Come back and give me life

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  • 15 years ago

    by Smilesunshine

    I noticed this poem only has a 3.0 score and that is completly wrong this is deffinantly 5/5 you did amazing with the emotion, and with your rhyming scheme, your words fit together perfectly it flowed nicely, i love everything about this poem

    great job
    deffinantly a 5/5

    I really like this line

    ''
    I wish I was tripping
    Over that empty suitcase by our door
    I wish I would just accept your love
    Instead of wishing I had more''