Well I like the idea that you have written this in a straight forward manner.Though it is simple but i like the content of the poem.I feel that the grip tt was once tight slowly slips away.Well keep on writing yeah

Excellent Job
5/5

This one has an unforced flow to that doesn't cross my sigals

5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

I like it... The usage of wOrds is simple... And yet YOu've expressed ur feelings n emOtiOns quite well. GoOd wOrk!

5/5. :)

I like this poem though i think you should give us a hint of what you did to ur friend 4/5

Simple but meaningful. Well-expressed emotions on how you really feel and you are straightforward and tell what you think. 5/5 from me, short but has such meaning when reading it. Nice work, I enjoyed reading this. Take care and keep writing, always and forever....

Theres dis special person i wrote about in because of u and through it all if u read it you'll see what i mean and we went through dis same experience but i dont regret her freindship5/5

I'm sorry. I know how this feels and it really sucks. =[
It was displayed wonderfully though. It really captured my attention.
Thanks for the comment. Sorry a comment back was delayed.
Great job!
5/5.

--**Skye~