I Need Someone?*

by Slap Stick Junkie   Jan 30, 2009


I need someone to hold me...
for i am weak...
your presence captures my heart....
clogs my lungs....
and i cant speak....

i need someone to talk to me....
for i have pain...
im sick and tired....
of being left alone in the rain.....
and slowly...
i am going insane....

i need someone trust me.....
for i cannot lie....
i want to tell you....
how i feel for you inside....
because these feelings....
i cannot hide...
these words i have wrote....
are playing over and over....
in my mind...
i finally realized....
that ive needed someone...
for a very long time....

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  • 13 years ago

    by Mike Martin

    VEry nice. I love it! I think the feelings just came right out of you. Don't feel alone tho, we are all in need of that..Good work. Keep it up...5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Cody B

    Good ending to a good write... Very well expressed keep it up!

  • 15 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Aww.... such a heartfelt, emotional write , that you have so well expressed, Lol . We all need someone... one day they will be there waiting for you! Well done on this piece :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Michel

    Everyone needs someone to hold to...but you have really open up your heart in this poem.
    Love and trust can come easy or built with time...
    just keep being who you truly are and you'll find that someone.

    5/5
    **

  • 15 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    Awww this was very cute, and sweet, Loved it

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