Wow.
Hun... that was a short story, not a poem. Lol, it was a little hard to read because it was all bunched together. Maybe if you could make where the characters names are a new line each time it might be a bit easier.
Great storyline! I really enjoyed it! Watch your spelling. ^_^

OMFG i love thisss story so much gosh its so romantic i love the shower seen where he is peeking his head out and yeah.....lol 5/5 great job!!!!

I liked it, kinda long, it took a while to read.
But, it's so romantic, and describes a strong relationship between the two of them.
I only didn't like that it was all put together and hard to understand.
5/5.

Great job!! i really like it!

I have read it, every word, and agree, it is to long, it may have needed to be put in 2 parts, but after reading it, i see why it needs not to be a two parter. It goes to well together, like a pizza without its sauce (I work at a local pizza place) and have seen it over and over again, people with no patiance, not reading something as good as this just because it is too long. well, I have to say, it was worth my time, and deserved the 5/5 rating. well, take care, and live life.
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The Spirit of the Poetry Knight